tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2529969472454786525.post3580367431136623481..comments2023-09-28T04:31:56.852-06:00Comments on TravelinOma: A Novel PostTravelin'Omahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18415472674768977723noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2529969472454786525.post-47623436478265016582010-08-05T08:09:21.340-06:002010-08-05T08:09:21.340-06:00More! More! More! That is fantastic. I can tot...More! More! More! That is fantastic. I can totally picture Jack in that scene. Well done, Omes.Christiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05769700320834756050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2529969472454786525.post-71743092121046924092010-07-28T00:29:00.820-06:002010-07-28T00:29:00.820-06:00Wonderful. And as for the homework, um, I uh... y...Wonderful. And as for the homework, um, I uh... yeah. Maybe someday.<br /><br />Keep up the good work!Heather Scott Partingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14010553024593582699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2529969472454786525.post-44687270619646218272010-07-27T09:59:34.909-06:002010-07-27T09:59:34.909-06:00Excellent. The trouble is, you know how to find th...Excellent. The trouble is, you know how to find those letters in your computer - and I don't!!kenjuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07342414519714356343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2529969472454786525.post-13829592334553682642010-07-27T09:41:17.472-06:002010-07-27T09:41:17.472-06:00Thanks Diane! (I changed it.) These are the detail...Thanks Diane! (I changed it.) These are the details that I can't see anymore. Ideally a book should be set aside for at least a month so you can read it with fresh eyes.Travelin'Omahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18415472674768977723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2529969472454786525.post-32100606809231936192010-07-27T09:23:19.106-06:002010-07-27T09:23:19.106-06:00I had to take a minute and get a drink of water be...I had to take a minute and get a drink of water before I could write a comment - this passage made me feel hot and parched.<br /><br />Only one question - you say he pulled the trigger with his left thumb. (Third paragraph from the end.) Is he shooting his gun backward? Do you mean he cocked the hammer with his thumb? Or, am I confused (a strong possibility)?<br /><br />Good job! I can't wait to read the rest.Dianehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01405496874813879203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2529969472454786525.post-41709992754224975382010-07-27T07:03:16.608-06:002010-07-27T07:03:16.608-06:00I can't wait to read the rest! As for the hom...I can't wait to read the rest! As for the homework, I'd be happy to finish a story to start off with :)Raejeanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16985044155519702057noreply@blogger.com